Broken
Broken, torn to pieces
Praying for relief
I cannot seem to mend me
I cannot lose this grief
One part of me is stoic
And says ‘it’ll be fine’
Believes it’s just a phase
Perhaps it’s just a sign
Another part is mourning
Of loss, unhappiness
feels like her heart is broken
whose life is but a mess
The third part’s running scared
She’s afraid to lose control
denying what is there
So she won’t fall in that hole
The fourth is feeling guilty
only thinking of herself
Feels that she should ignore
Her confused and broken self
And all of them are fighting
To gain the upper ground
Each makes another stronger
And weakens one as sound
And while that fight is raging
It weakens all of me
How much more could I stand of this,
How broken could I be
Praying for relief
I cannot seem to mend me
I cannot lose this grief
One part of me is stoic
And says ‘it’ll be fine’
Believes it’s just a phase
Perhaps it’s just a sign
Another part is mourning
Of loss, unhappiness
feels like her heart is broken
whose life is but a mess
The third part’s running scared
She’s afraid to lose control
denying what is there
So she won’t fall in that hole
The fourth is feeling guilty
only thinking of herself
Feels that she should ignore
Her confused and broken self
And all of them are fighting
To gain the upper ground
Each makes another stronger
And weakens one as sound
And while that fight is raging
It weakens all of me
How much more could I stand of this,
How broken could I be
Reacties op dit gedicht
| entropy: | Donderdag, december 10, 2009 17:00 |
| Erg mooi geschreven. entropy. |
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| nana: | Maandag, december 31, 2007 15:54 |
| herkenbaar :-) schitterend geschreven! |
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| Milady M: | Vrijdag, oktober 12, 2007 10:33 |
| Mooi! | |
| Windwhisper: | Vrijdag, oktober 12, 2007 07:43 |
| Het zou zo een lied kunnen zijn, Goede morgen Liefs Cobie Kuzzz |
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| MG Poetry: | Vrijdag, oktober 12, 2007 00:46 |
| I liked your poem very much, your English is marvellous! Regards, MG |
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| Auteur: Echo | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 12 oktober 2007 | ||
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