indefinitely
Forlorn in determenation
He relentless goes on
alone
Roaming the worlds
long forgotten
or yet
unkown
Pursuiting this
Unquestionable Quest
Fearless and scarred
as he is
Born to be, to last
Mind set on destiny
Coldhearted
or so he claims to be
The ending awaits
indefinitely
For that's not the aim
It's just to be
He relentless goes on
alone
Roaming the worlds
long forgotten
or yet
unkown
Pursuiting this
Unquestionable Quest
Fearless and scarred
as he is
Born to be, to last
Mind set on destiny
Coldhearted
or so he claims to be
The ending awaits
indefinitely
For that's not the aim
It's just to be
Reacties op dit gedicht
| wie niet ?: | Vrijdag, februari 13, 2009 00:56 |
| helelmaal gelijk, dat is een foutje :) | |
| Werner Domroese: | Woensdag, februari 11, 2009 02:19 |
| Quite enjoyed this poem. You may want to check your third stanza though, for I am a bit confused. I think you might''ve meant pursuing or perhaps in pursuit of, but it''s a bit unclear to me. Inspiring story. | |
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| Gecontroleerd door: Innerchild | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 10 februari 2009 | ||
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