Please speak to me
You look at me and give a smile,
you say that nothing's wrong.
But I've known you for a while
and your eyes dont smile along.
Please tell me why your heart cries.
I'll listen soft with loving ears.
I wont judge or give advice,
but try to hear your pain and fears.
I'd like for you to share your soul with me.
Show me a pathway to your heart.
For i'd dislike the way my world would be,
if our thoughts would live a world apart.
Please dont blame yourself at every turn,
you always did what then seemed best.
No one's perfect, its the way we learn,
i so dislike to see you stressed.
So tell me if there's anything,
if there is anything that i could do,
to make you smile to make you sing,
make you love yourself as i love you.
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| Lion10cc: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2010 21:49 |
| nicely written poem with 1 remark you have used the letter I wich is supposed to be a capital letter always er is no i it doesn''t exist as an independent word in english captital I is (ik-vorm) otherwise a nice poem polite greetings Leon |
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| Just*mi: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2010 16:55 |
| omg... | |
| Roselynn: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2010 11:10 |
| true words are spoken .... have a nice day ...[]Rose |
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