A dream or two
A dream or two
think about the lines, my dear
and I will colour your dreams
tell me about all your lies
I’ll paint them in sweetening shine
let me listen to your screams
of pleasure
when you’re ready to dream, my sweet child
my songs will kiss you goodbye
are you ready to have a dream or two
to visit the blue lagoon
tell me your lies
I’ll believe
think about a beautiful place
when I try to raise a smile on your face
show me your desire and your hope
I’ll make them dance on ropes
let me catch your tears
before they reach the floor
Love’s Requiem ©
think about the lines, my dear
and I will colour your dreams
tell me about all your lies
I’ll paint them in sweetening shine
let me listen to your screams
of pleasure
when you’re ready to dream, my sweet child
my songs will kiss you goodbye
are you ready to have a dream or two
to visit the blue lagoon
tell me your lies
I’ll believe
think about a beautiful place
when I try to raise a smile on your face
show me your desire and your hope
I’ll make them dance on ropes
let me catch your tears
before they reach the floor
Love’s Requiem ©
Reacties op dit gedicht
| LovesRequiem: | Donderdag, juli 29, 2010 07:32 |
| Ik heb niet om opbouwende kritiek gevraagd. Anders had dat wel bij mijn gedicht gestaan, dank je. | |
| P.S. de Winter: | Woensdag, juli 28, 2010 20:00 |
| ik werd er niet door gepakt, er staan best mooie woorden in, maar het lijkt wel een driedelig stuk tekst, ik mis de eenheid. | |
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| Auteur: LovesRequiem | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Innerchild | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 28 juli 2010 | ||
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