Promise
Seeing through the eyes of obscurity
I once again stand alone
Where every detail gets distorted
and the heart just renders numb
Dissipating emotions
just scattered across my soul
I felt hope where hope was already lost
Unbeknowing it raised it's head
Just to be cut off with a swift strike
of fate's sharp edged blade
I lie here bleeding once again
In quiet anticipation
Of that which I cannot ever have
My restless mind bound for insanity
Can only find consolation in words
That rise from the depths of my being
My essence unveiled in countless actions
But always blind to the truth
As I walk a very thin line
Between heaven and hell
Where the Abyss gazes right back into
the windows to my soul
And so fleets away my last hope
On the storms of ever cascading thoughts
Seeping through my lost consciousness
Only to find, that I am still here
Weakend yet again
But only for a short time
Til my breath gets carried away
Once more on the winds of change
And I promise myself
As I have done so many countless times before
To never be hurt again
Maybe this time...
I will keep my promise
I once again stand alone
Where every detail gets distorted
and the heart just renders numb
Dissipating emotions
just scattered across my soul
I felt hope where hope was already lost
Unbeknowing it raised it's head
Just to be cut off with a swift strike
of fate's sharp edged blade
I lie here bleeding once again
In quiet anticipation
Of that which I cannot ever have
My restless mind bound for insanity
Can only find consolation in words
That rise from the depths of my being
My essence unveiled in countless actions
But always blind to the truth
As I walk a very thin line
Between heaven and hell
Where the Abyss gazes right back into
the windows to my soul
And so fleets away my last hope
On the storms of ever cascading thoughts
Seeping through my lost consciousness
Only to find, that I am still here
Weakend yet again
But only for a short time
Til my breath gets carried away
Once more on the winds of change
And I promise myself
As I have done so many countless times before
To never be hurt again
Maybe this time...
I will keep my promise
Reacties op dit gedicht
| René V.: | Dinsdag, juni 28, 2011 07:49 |
| Dank je Cobie! Fijne dag vandaag :) | |
| windwhisper: | Dinsdag, juni 28, 2011 07:23 |
| gisteren nam de zon me mee, het huis uit, weg van de pc Vanmorgen las ik jouw belofte, in je laatste zin, (de rest ook hoor ) ik moet beamen daat Godvader hieronder het juiste zegt, je stijl en nee...vervelen doet die niet pliuk de zomerse dag lfs Cobie |
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| René V.: | Maandag, juni 27, 2011 15:01 |
| Haha.. :) Gelukkig maar dan ;) Thnx! |
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| Godvader: | Maandag, juni 27, 2011 14:48 |
| ook deze maar ff doorgenomen..je stijl verveelt nog niet haha gr. G |
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| Auteur: René V. | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Erwin | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 27 juni 2011 | ||
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