To mesmerise...
He could merely be puzzled
with the words that dangled,
drizzled from the cloud’s tongue...
A sky in its most bluish of forms
that graced recent memories
Unflappable and unintelligible
Starstruck in the night, and dwelling his mind
in halcyon times and through has-beens
Waving his hand goodbye with his other one
If only people could see now
what he saw then,
gazing skywards and into
multiple pantheons, countless utopias
So maybe he was
a trifling young man,
his dreams still grew further
than his eyes would devise in daily life
Oh well...
with the words that dangled,
drizzled from the cloud’s tongue...
A sky in its most bluish of forms
that graced recent memories
Unflappable and unintelligible
Starstruck in the night, and dwelling his mind
in halcyon times and through has-beens
Waving his hand goodbye with his other one
If only people could see now
what he saw then,
gazing skywards and into
multiple pantheons, countless utopias
So maybe he was
a trifling young man,
his dreams still grew further
than his eyes would devise in daily life
Oh well...
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Paul de Bruijn: | Maandag, juli 16, 2012 19:42 |
| Quel vocabulaire.. Magnifique! P. |
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| Godvader: | Woensdag, juli 11, 2012 19:18 |
| haha Kramer zelfs...! ik schrijf nog steeds te onsamenhangend of gewoon te esoterisch...zal ''t je de volgende x ni zo moeilijk meer maken ;) gr. Y |
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| wervelende regenboog: | Woensdag, juli 11, 2012 14:05 |
| veel onbekende woorden dus Kramer moest er weer aan te pas komen...;) aan het eind was ik de betekenis van de eerder gevonden woorden alweer bijna kwijt :( ik maak ervan: een jonge knaap die eigenlijk in twee werelden leeft; het liefst in zijn droomwereld die zich steeds verder uitbreidt hgrt Yoeri wr |
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| Auteur: Godvader | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 11 juli 2012 | ||
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