Shadow love
Movement entails progress
Anything less,
will swipe you back
to the shadows
Shadow of love
You're being called
'a heart's mistake'
Like when Cupid shoots
with broken arrows
I know,
it just wasn't enough
But what I felt wasn't fake
Use elegant words
and still even than translation
can sometimes be rough
Whisper unsaid feelings
to a star satellite
you'll never catch up
and you'll end as a shadow love
Anything less,
will swipe you back
to the shadows
Shadow of love
You're being called
'a heart's mistake'
Like when Cupid shoots
with broken arrows
I know,
it just wasn't enough
But what I felt wasn't fake
Use elegant words
and still even than translation
can sometimes be rough
Whisper unsaid feelings
to a star satellite
you'll never catch up
and you'll end as a shadow love
Reacties op dit gedicht
| september: | Maandag, oktober 30, 2017 13:47 |
| Heel mooi Ivde. Het zet sterk en gevoelig een duidelijke sfeer neer. Liefs | |
| Avr: | Zondag, oktober 29, 2017 12:47 |
| Droef mooi schrijven,Ivde! Vooral de tweede strofe! mvg Avr | |
| Roselynn: | Zondag, oktober 29, 2017 10:54 |
| In the shadow of my eyes Words are only what they say.. And the feeling isn't wrong.. Lovely written |
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| Janny Scheybeler de Jonge: | Zondag, oktober 29, 2017 10:46 |
| sorry ik ken onvoldoende engels om dit te waarderen | |
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| Auteur: lvde | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: de redactie | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 29 oktober 2017 | ||
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