deceptive pretender (gothic poem)
My brok’n, bleedin’, unloved Heart
That was bleedin’ dyin’ from the start
Begins to beat faster ‘nd ever faster
Predictin’ unavoidable approachin’ disaster
O, my sweet darling, please dance with me
On this never hallowed for God ‘n heathen Sanctuary
Let us dance, until the Silver Moon proudly stands
Shining over Cursed Heaven and the Doomed Lands
Behold Death revealin’ its Secret mighty Powers
Sittin’ between chrysanthemums, lovely lethal flowers
Shall only the Silver Moon be my true witness
Of what makes thy lyin’ winsome Love so worthless
Pain ‘n Love made me wanna make this sacrifice
I prefer to die rather than livin’ this life of tainted lies
For I cannot win thy lethal Battle, I must surrender
O sweet Darling, thee shall always be a deceptive pretender
To dance = to die
This never hallowed for God ‘n heathen Sanctuary =
This never hallowed for God and this heathen Sanctuary
This never hallowed, forgotten heathen Sanctuary
Silver moon = unreachable love
Lethal flowers or little flowers
Pain ‘n love = pain and love or pain in love
That was bleedin’ dyin’ from the start
Begins to beat faster ‘nd ever faster
Predictin’ unavoidable approachin’ disaster
O, my sweet darling, please dance with me
On this never hallowed for God ‘n heathen Sanctuary
Let us dance, until the Silver Moon proudly stands
Shining over Cursed Heaven and the Doomed Lands
Behold Death revealin’ its Secret mighty Powers
Sittin’ between chrysanthemums, lovely lethal flowers
Shall only the Silver Moon be my true witness
Of what makes thy lyin’ winsome Love so worthless
Pain ‘n Love made me wanna make this sacrifice
I prefer to die rather than livin’ this life of tainted lies
For I cannot win thy lethal Battle, I must surrender
O sweet Darling, thee shall always be a deceptive pretender
To dance = to die
This never hallowed for God ‘n heathen Sanctuary =
This never hallowed for God and this heathen Sanctuary
This never hallowed, forgotten heathen Sanctuary
Silver moon = unreachable love
Lethal flowers or little flowers
Pain ‘n love = pain and love or pain in love
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Disciple: | Vrijdag, december 22, 2006 08:40 |
| Ja, dit is er echt een om naar op te kijken! Prachtig, echt prachtig! | |
| babygirl: | Donderdag, juni 12, 2003 18:11 |
| i just wanna let you know that i understand what you're writing about... i feel just the same greetzzz from a little gothic girl |
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| *just a girl*: | Zaterdag, juni 08, 2002 21:18 |
| prachtig gedicht hendrik xxxkimmekexxx |
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| lenore: | Zaterdag, juni 08, 2002 20:45 |
| shit,kdacht dak al gereageerd had op dit gedicht,nou toch niet dus.Maar wees zeker je trouw lezeresje had ze toch gelezen... ik vind het een erg mooi gedicht,hou van de duisterheid die er in verweven zit.Geeft me echt trek om hier allemaal kaarsen en wierrook aan te steken. kusjes Lotje durf nie te stoppe me schrijven want fdan kommek na brakel en sluit u op me alleen pen en papier in je kamer!!!! |
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| sleepless: | Donderdag, juni 06, 2002 12:00 |
| Goh Hendrik, deze is gewoonweg prachtig!!! Heel innemend werkje. Ook die woordspelingen, waardoor je het gedicht op meerdere manieren kunt lezen. Prachtig gewoon! Groetjes. |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: darkmind | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: maneschijn | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 05 juni 2002 | ||
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