Who am I?
I'm shy like a child who lost his voice.
I'm angry like a kid who can't get his toys.
I'm insecure like an infant who's just gone to school.
I'm weak like a teenager who thinks she's a fool.
I'm strange like an outcast who doesn't fit in.
I'm hopeless like a loser who can't win.
I'm affraid like a baby without his mother.
I'm hurt like lovers who broke up with each other.
I'm damaged like a bug who's been crushed.
I'm fading away like a box covered with dust.
I'm stupid like a student who failed his exam.
But i can't change myself, I am who I am!!!
I'm angry like a kid who can't get his toys.
I'm insecure like an infant who's just gone to school.
I'm weak like a teenager who thinks she's a fool.
I'm strange like an outcast who doesn't fit in.
I'm hopeless like a loser who can't win.
I'm affraid like a baby without his mother.
I'm hurt like lovers who broke up with each other.
I'm damaged like a bug who's been crushed.
I'm fading away like a box covered with dust.
I'm stupid like a student who failed his exam.
But i can't change myself, I am who I am!!!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Fading Away: | Maandag, augustus 29, 2005 01:08 |
| Sterk ritme, mooie ongeforceerde rijm. Je gebruikt hier originele maar herkenbare beelden, leuk! | |
| gothicangel: | Woensdag, november 24, 2004 22:14 |
| and i love you the way you are miss you |
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| biketje: | Vrijdag, mei 14, 2004 20:26 |
| het is krachtig en prachtig...ik ben verzot op je gedichten gewoon...een fan bi'ke... | |
| Dark Sinner : | Donderdag, april 08, 2004 21:05 |
| I Like It!! Kben fan!! Echt super!! | |
| daisy devries: | Dinsdag, maart 30, 2004 20:02 |
| Idd, ik wist wel dat het de moeite waard was de rest van jouw gedichtjes ook te leze! Echt P R A C H T I G !! |
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| Rino Saurus: | Donderdag, augustus 21, 2003 15:43 |
| Hihi, nee, ik blijf wakker tot na middernacht. En ben dan zo ongeduldig om het volgende gedicht in te sturen dat ik dat dan al doe. ;-) Amai, ge overtreft uzelf weer! Prachtige metaforen, goed ritme, goed geplaatste herhaling, sterke clou en na lang zoeken kan ik maar 1 schrijffout vinden ('afraid' is met 1 'f'). You're making huge progress! Keep it up! (y) |
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| The unreachable: | Donderdag, augustus 21, 2003 11:08 |
| k'ga tijdje weg zijn...ma I'll be back, hehe, take care...gedichtenfreakjes | |
| MayadeBij: | Donderdag, augustus 21, 2003 11:06 |
| Leuk! | |
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| Auteur: The unreachable | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: ;o)x | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 21 augustus 2003 | ||
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