Vision
Your whisper, your smile..
it's hidden, feels forbidden..
and it only takes a while..
Your voice, your reaction..
makes me weak, makes me seak..
but it's only a reflection..
Your eyes, your hands..
they will walk, they will talk..
and tell me what your soul demands..
Your envision, is my vision..
and I feel, you aren't real..
living in your own dimension..
Lifeless: | Woensdag, oktober 13, 2004 21:41 |
who's not living in it's own dimension? who's not ordering around? who doesn't think they're the best and expect you to be bound maybe i do maybe i don't i'll certanly try failing, i won't what can I say just another great poem keep up the good work! |
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S a n n i e: | Maandag, augustus 16, 2004 14:37 |
Waauw peachtig geschreven! proficiat.. dit gedicht spreekt me echt aan.. xxx |
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darkness*: | Maandag, augustus 16, 2004 13:16 |
hij is heel mooi geschreven trouwens.. ; Your whisper, your smile.. it's hidden, feels forbidden.. and it only takes a while.. zeker dat stukje! spreekt me heel erg aan.. kusje! -xxx- |
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darkness*: | Maandag, augustus 16, 2004 13:15 |
op een een of andere manier kom ik onbewust altijd bij jou gedichten uit, en zie later dat JIJ ze geschreven hebt.. hihi, kusje! |
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Auteur: sorriso promise | ||
Gecontroleerd door: michris | ||
Gepubliceerd op: 16 augustus 2004 | ||
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