How to make a poem, lesson 1
hmmmm...
(frown thoughtfully and look wise, use pipe to enhance effect)
I think I shall write another poem
I began... to think...
I began to think with all my heart
yes (look enlightened but not overjoyed, put pipe away)
that turns out to be quit a good start
...let's see if I can do this...
(walk slowly through room and mutter in beard)
When I was walking in the rain
...
when I was walking in the dead greyness of rain
... again....
something something never to be again
... maybe I should write this down...
and...hmm and than what
and at once it occured to me
your whole life is just a breathingspace
before eternity
...
That sounded great!
...
What did I say...
What did I say?!
*thus witness the birth and immediate death of yet another great poem...*
Reacties op dit gedicht
| vera mooij: | Zondag, november 14, 2004 20:38 |
| haha leuk hoor tim! nu nog les 2 en 3 en 4 en dan de van dijk brown en ene afro kapsel en ene lief klein hertje erbij en je bent net mr afro van happy painting, I wish you happy writing a poem! liefs vera |
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| *Lia *: | Vrijdag, oktober 01, 2004 16:37 |
| nice poem... en nu lesson 2? Groetjes, Lia |
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| BloodElf: | Vrijdag, oktober 01, 2004 16:32 |
| *kijkt vreemd naar het beeldscherm* Optimaal opgenomen ingeveterder Vitaminen heb jij geslikt! IK WIST HET!! |
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| Green Tea: | Vrijdag, oktober 01, 2004 14:29 |
| Geweldig!! :-) We want more?! Liefs , |
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| Jan Schaap: | Vrijdag, oktober 01, 2004 14:27 |
| yes...yes... think, speak and write English while you're name is Mooij...Oh, thats... Beautiful?! Groet |
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| de nifter: | Vrijdag, oktober 01, 2004 14:13 |
| ik ben niet raar... de rest wel... die zeker. maar ik dus niet. sorry for the mix-up.... | |
| MayadeBij: | Vrijdag, oktober 01, 2004 13:29 |
| great :) !! | |
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| Gecontroleerd door: benji | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 01 oktober 2004 | ||
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