tribute...
**ik ben een tribute aan het maken voor al mn favoriete lyrics..eigenlijk een vreemd tribute mss, ik schrijf bij elk stukje tekst dat ik mooi vind een klein gedicht-iets..nu ja, ik vroeg me af, omdat ik nogal twijfel aan mezelf en onzeker ben over het feit of deze gedichten goed zijn om in mn tribute te zetten, wat jullie ervan vinden..nou ja, ik zal zwijgen..bedankt voor het lezen dan alleszins**
-running away (van hoobastank)
~when i get close you turn away, there's nothing that i can do or say..
why are you running away?~ (originele tekst)
'she tried to break through his silence
but he lost every word along his way
she reached out to give him her hand
but he just turned and walked away
for fear crawled in his troubled mind
and haunting memories locked his heart
he wasn't able to show her his love
he believed that would drive them apart
she tried to push away his silence
denying the signs that lead to his goodbye
forcing herself to believe this wasn't real
still..she couldn't stop wondering why' (mijn stukje)
-pieces (ook van hoobastank)
~suffocating, sinking further..almost every day, barely treading water..~ (origineel)
'drifting away on waves of confusion
waiting 'till oblivion takes the pain
the ice cold water silences your screams
nothing but illusions to keep you sane
drowning in a river of numbness
wanting everything to fade away
while obscurity silences your thoughts
you're sinking further everyday' (mijn stukje)
-running away (van hoobastank)
~when i get close you turn away, there's nothing that i can do or say..
why are you running away?~ (originele tekst)
'she tried to break through his silence
but he lost every word along his way
she reached out to give him her hand
but he just turned and walked away
for fear crawled in his troubled mind
and haunting memories locked his heart
he wasn't able to show her his love
he believed that would drive them apart
she tried to push away his silence
denying the signs that lead to his goodbye
forcing herself to believe this wasn't real
still..she couldn't stop wondering why' (mijn stukje)
-pieces (ook van hoobastank)
~suffocating, sinking further..almost every day, barely treading water..~ (origineel)
'drifting away on waves of confusion
waiting 'till oblivion takes the pain
the ice cold water silences your screams
nothing but illusions to keep you sane
drowning in a river of numbness
wanting everything to fade away
while obscurity silences your thoughts
you're sinking further everyday' (mijn stukje)
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Zaterdag, januari 01, 2005 01:37 |
| Incredible.. | |
| gothicangel: | Maandag, december 27, 2004 19:32 |
| 1 woord GEWELDIG! | |
| fallen angel of tears: | Zondag, december 12, 2004 15:41 |
| ik ze super! Pyro heeft gelijk! xjes me |
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| Pyro: | Zondag, december 12, 2004 05:14 |
| Your parts are even better than the original ones, girl :). Keep on going, you're a great writer! With love, Pyro |
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| Teared Out: | Zaterdag, december 04, 2004 19:43 |
| Ik sluit me aan bij Wicked Soul!! =) Vooral die eerste vind ik echt supermooi & ook wel herkenbaar, op de een of andere manier. Maargoed; ik wou je eigenlijk even bedanken voor je hoop- en rustgevende reacties telkens weer. Het doet me wel goed. =) Ik vind het lief van je. Liefs, |
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| BloodElf: | Donderdag, december 02, 2004 21:50 |
| Wauw, met veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel open mondstukjes gelezen!! Doe nog eens :D |
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| Wicked Soul: | Zaterdag, november 20, 2004 21:47 |
| Goed? NEE. That's not how I call them... They're wonderful, amazing, yeah dear, believe it or not: breath-taking (too! ;)). Ontzettend mooie gedichten, lieve Geetha. Wat meer zelfvertrouwen zou best mogen... Echt waar. Ik mail je zo snel ik kan... Liefs, Knuffel, -Lien.- |
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| Auteur: life~in~every~breath~ | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Firebolt | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 19 november 2004 | ||
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