Free as a bird ( Part 2)
Many months has passed without you here.
Still can't help thinking about you.
Looking down on us- i know you must be near.
Where does life all leads to?
Came across your friends once or twice,
taliking about you- crazy things you did.
How old you were- how time flies.
About the flames you used to lit.
I didn't knew you as good as them.
I wish i did- what were you thinking about?
All your crazy views you had to defend.
Misunderstood by most of the crowd.
Nowadays i'd like to remember you as a man
who was always happy and cheerful,
but whose life came too quickly to an end.
I picture you're smiling when you look down on us all.
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Benjamin de Rooy: | Maandag, augustus 15, 2005 17:28 |
| de boodschap en het verhaal is mooi... alleen heel jammer dat het engels te gebrekkig is. spelling is niet in orde, woordkeus, vervoegingen, het zit niet lekker in elkaar. denk dat je het beter bij het nederlands kunt houden, want dit doet afbraak aan je gedichten. |
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| Auteur: lizardking | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: benji | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 15 augustus 2005 | ||
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