bitch
god created heaven
god created earth
Human he gave birth
and then I was made
to entertain all
you told me you loved
you told me you cared
but actually you forgot
the moments we shared
You said goodbye
I said goodbye
and finally you took away to fly
masks and carnaval
have conquered your mind
what are you looking to find?
I tried to help you trough this night
but why
why
did you start this fight??
I cannot control this pain
maybe I left in shame
but why
why
did I left with all blame??
you killed all my selfrespect
you murdered the only thing I still had
you made me fade away
leave me and go to your 'friends'
never come back, stay!
you're everything I fought for
everything I closed the door for
your dreams I shut down
just like your screams...
bitch
jackass
this isn't what I deserve
but I'll leave you, just you'd know
but never come back to cry
'cause this really is goodbye!
god created earth
Human he gave birth
and then I was made
to entertain all
you told me you loved
you told me you cared
but actually you forgot
the moments we shared
You said goodbye
I said goodbye
and finally you took away to fly
masks and carnaval
have conquered your mind
what are you looking to find?
I tried to help you trough this night
but why
why
did you start this fight??
I cannot control this pain
maybe I left in shame
but why
why
did I left with all blame??
you killed all my selfrespect
you murdered the only thing I still had
you made me fade away
leave me and go to your 'friends'
never come back, stay!
you're everything I fought for
everything I closed the door for
your dreams I shut down
just like your screams...
bitch
jackass
this isn't what I deserve
but I'll leave you, just you'd know
but never come back to cry
'cause this really is goodbye!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| observer: | Zondag, maart 26, 2006 18:05 |
| you shouldn''t have any comment on the subject of the poem. It isn''t anyones business. Say is is a beautifull poem you can. Identify with it you can. Disagree you may but that you shouldn''t say. I like your poems too. |
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| *sadgirl*: | Zondag, maart 26, 2006 17:31 |
| I''m sorry for the people who are going to write something as a reaction on my poem. but I would really appreciate if you''d first read it again, for the second, maybe third time, so you''d really understand the meaning, really understand the pain. this poem is no good-writing, this poem is no piece of art, no, this poem is a piece of my heart. thx |
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| Gecontroleerd door: maneschijn | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 26 maart 2006 | ||
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