death
when my heart stopped beating,
en you looked into my eyes,
i felt that you where scared.
you told me you loved me,
that you where going to miss me.
and that you would never forget me.
suddenly it was dark.
my eyes where wide open.
and my hands on my chest.
a black rose next to me..
i'm in my own coffin.
i hear people crying.
now i remember.
i took a knife and cut my wrists.
blood every where.
i fell down.
and that's when i realised i was dead.
en you looked into my eyes,
i felt that you where scared.
you told me you loved me,
that you where going to miss me.
and that you would never forget me.
suddenly it was dark.
my eyes where wide open.
and my hands on my chest.
a black rose next to me..
i'm in my own coffin.
i hear people crying.
now i remember.
i took a knife and cut my wrists.
blood every where.
i fell down.
and that's when i realised i was dead.
Reacties op dit gedicht
| dark_dreamer: | Donderdag, april 27, 2006 14:43 |
| mooi geschreven;) | |
| -*poison_ivy*-: | Maandag, april 24, 2006 21:08 |
| zie van mezelf een paar spelfouten :P moet je maar niet op letten. -*poison_ivy*- |
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| Chichitje: | Maandag, april 24, 2006 19:26 |
| Prachtig gedicht! | |
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| Auteur: forgivethedying | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 24 april 2006 | ||
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