Once upon a time
Once upon a time,
a little rock was born.
A special one this time,
her clothes never been worn-
Guided by the moon,
the planet started to grow.
And after some diseases,
earth was ready to go-
She went around the sun some times,
and visited big stars.
But short a parasite came,
that gave her smoke and cars.
Yes, the human form of cancer,
it brought her home to die.
Now sister moon is guiding,
so mother sun has time to cry.
a little rock was born.
A special one this time,
her clothes never been worn-
Guided by the moon,
the planet started to grow.
And after some diseases,
earth was ready to go-
She went around the sun some times,
and visited big stars.
But short a parasite came,
that gave her smoke and cars.
Yes, the human form of cancer,
it brought her home to die.
Now sister moon is guiding,
so mother sun has time to cry.
Reacties op dit gedicht
| NnEAh: | Maandag, september 10, 2007 02:20 |
| Hoi allemaal, bedankt voor jullie reacties! En ja die laatste 6 verzen... Een beetje abrupt, net zoals de industrie die je wakker schud als je een prachtig bos uitwandelt... |
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| Augustijntje: | Donderdag, september 06, 2007 21:24 |
| nicely written x! |
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| cosmicdoom: | Donderdag, september 06, 2007 20:16 |
| wow een van de betere vandaag.greetzz Jurgen | |
| Hanika: | Donderdag, september 06, 2007 20:09 |
| Ik vind het mooi, maar de laatste 6 verzen vind ik niet zo denderend, sorry. Toch mooi geheel. Liefs, Hanika |
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| dixxie: | Donderdag, september 06, 2007 20:07 |
| wauw, prachtig. heb er effe geen woorden voor. wauw... mooi, liefs anne |
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| mutsj: | Donderdag, september 06, 2007 20:06 |
| Wauw, heel mooi, sterk geschreven / mooii beschreven... Sterkte ermee! xx.MuTsj |
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| Auteur: NnEAh | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: benji | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 06 september 2007 | ||
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