cracks in her skin
Cracks in her skin
Intoxicated by the smell of sin
Its all coming in waves
No time to restore
I keep my self well hidden in caves
She’s being pulled under
I gasping for some air
She’s drowning and she wonder
Waiting for things to be fair
Songs in her head playing the music that goes by her life
Every single day goes by in slow-motion
Hanging on a thread of her will to survive
Wish she could ride with the ocean
Gasoline stains she tried to set IT on fire
Please strip her pain away
There is no more desire
She suffered, fought hard but still has to pay
Intoxicated by the smell of sin
Its all coming in waves
No time to restore
I keep my self well hidden in caves
She’s being pulled under
I gasping for some air
She’s drowning and she wonder
Waiting for things to be fair
Songs in her head playing the music that goes by her life
Every single day goes by in slow-motion
Hanging on a thread of her will to survive
Wish she could ride with the ocean
Gasoline stains she tried to set IT on fire
Please strip her pain away
There is no more desire
She suffered, fought hard but still has to pay
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Werner Domroese: | Zaterdag, november 29, 2008 21:42 |
| Intens. Kleurstelling past ook bij de strekking van ''t gedicht. | |
| Jessrose**: | Zaterdag, oktober 25, 2008 23:02 |
| Bedankt voor je reacties, ik kan niet anders zeggen dan dat ik zowel hetzelfde over jouw gedichten denk. Inhoudelijk erg goed, je leest er goed doorheen. Ik verbaas me vaak over hoe mooi iets negatiefs kan worden door er over te schrijven, dat heb ik bij jouw gedichten ook. Groetjes Jes I''m looking forward to read some new stuff :) |
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| into: | Dinsdag, september 16, 2008 16:36 |
| die van jou zijn anders ook niet mis ;) | |
| Dina-Anna: | Dinsdag, augustus 26, 2008 21:59 |
| Héél sterk en intens! Liefs Dina |
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| Am92: | Dinsdag, augustus 26, 2008 21:49 |
| NIce! | |
| Littledolphin: | Dinsdag, augustus 26, 2008 21:19 |
| intens rakend liefs little | |
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| Auteur: fairyofsuicide | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Innerchild | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 26 augustus 2008 | ||
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