You became a dream
Have you ever loved someone
So deeply ...
... that you almost drowned?
So pure...
... that water became filthy?
Have you ever wanted someone
So much ...
... that hours became days?
So much ...
... that days with her became hours?
Have you ever needed someone
Wihout ...
... knowing her name?
But ...
... knowing how she walks?
You have to know
I do
Because I
Want you so deeply
And so pure
That you became a dream
Never coming true
So deeply ...
... that you almost drowned?
So pure...
... that water became filthy?
Have you ever wanted someone
So much ...
... that hours became days?
So much ...
... that days with her became hours?
Have you ever needed someone
Wihout ...
... knowing her name?
But ...
... knowing how she walks?
You have to know
I do
Because I
Want you so deeply
And so pure
That you became a dream
Never coming true
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Samhain: | Vrijdag, november 28, 2008 23:34 |
| Wow, yes I know his name and I long for him, I want him so BAD, with love and hug | |
| Lone Dreamer: | Vrijdag, november 28, 2008 23:18 |
| Yeah, I have... I did know the name, though :p Sterk geschreven, vooral laatste strofe en laatste zin... Welkom op gf en sterkte Grtz, L(one)S(ome)D(reamer) |
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| Auteur: liveyourlifelive | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: pantarhei | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 28 november 2008 | ||
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