Unbroken memories
Unbroken memories
As we feel paralyzed in our comfort zone,
memories remind us of former days.
Too much heartache, too many broken bones,
I have loved you in many different ways.
In the stormy night when I came in,
your heart was trying to flee.
Too many words and heavy rain,
are hiding the beauty of this gallery.
In all those unbroken memories I can hear,
the words your heart once spoke.
For years I have turned to thee,
to the light to take me home.
Anita©
As we feel paralyzed in our comfort zone,
memories remind us of former days.
Too much heartache, too many broken bones,
I have loved you in many different ways.
In the stormy night when I came in,
your heart was trying to flee.
Too many words and heavy rain,
are hiding the beauty of this gallery.
In all those unbroken memories I can hear,
the words your heart once spoke.
For years I have turned to thee,
to the light to take me home.
Anita©
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Zo Gezegd: | Woensdag, augustus 31, 2011 00:01 |
| Dit vind ik echt een hele mooie! Ik hou normaal niet zo van riijm, maar hier is het heel subtiel als het rijmt en dan de assonantie werkt ook goed. Nice! | |
| Godvader: | Woensdag, augustus 17, 2011 01:01 |
| hey, zie dat de engelse lerares weer back in town is..dank voor de reactie op mijn gedicht..probeer de jouwe ook weer te volgen!:) deze is in heel begrijpeljk engels geschreven.. gr. Y |
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| Auteur: LovesRequiem | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 16 augustus 2011 | ||
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