One dimensional
ONE-DIMENSIONAL
Impressive, while I
prefer 'arrival feet'
than welcome feet
I miss the space after the comma
as well as your photo of the two of us
taken by a bystander
and which you were going to send
Herbert Marcuse knew us
still young and promising
Impressive, while I
prefer 'arrival feet'
than welcome feet
I miss the space after the comma
as well as your photo of the two of us
taken by a bystander
and which you were going to send
Herbert Marcuse knew us
still young and promising
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Stanislaus Jaworski: | Maandag, maart 30, 2026 01:09 |
| EEN-DIMENSIONAAL Indrukwekkend, terwijl ik liever zeg "Aankomst" dan "Welkom¨ Ik mis de spatie na de komma evenals de foto van ons twee genomen door een omstander die jij gezonden zou hebben Herbert Marcuse kende ons nog jong en veelbelovend |
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| Auteur: Stanislaus Jaworski | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 29 maart 2026 | ||
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