life of a poor little girl
She was just a little girl who said ‘I’ll find a way’
Just a pretty little girl who said ‘I’ll be ok’
But then her daddy started drinking
At the very same time her mummy stopped thinking
Daddy loved her but didn’t know how to show it
He said ‘you are my little princess and you know it’
But when he was drunk he abused her in the name of love
Unable to see the gallow that waited for him up above
Her mummy saw it all but offered no protection
Instead she ran away, looking for affection
She slept with men to forget about her pain
Leaving her daughter behind with the man that was insane
So the poor little girl never really found a way
Deep in her heart she knew she’d never be okay
So she ran and ran until her feet refused to hold
With a heart too heavy for a girl of only 10 years old
She reached the beach and saw the river
Her feet were numb and she started to shiver
Gazing at the water she made up her mind
Her feet started moving, her eyes just went blind
A week later her lifeless body was found
The sweet little girl lay dead on the ground
Her life on this earth had been too much to bare
But would her mummy and daddy ever really care?
Just a pretty little girl who said ‘I’ll be ok’
But then her daddy started drinking
At the very same time her mummy stopped thinking
Daddy loved her but didn’t know how to show it
He said ‘you are my little princess and you know it’
But when he was drunk he abused her in the name of love
Unable to see the gallow that waited for him up above
Her mummy saw it all but offered no protection
Instead she ran away, looking for affection
She slept with men to forget about her pain
Leaving her daughter behind with the man that was insane
So the poor little girl never really found a way
Deep in her heart she knew she’d never be okay
So she ran and ran until her feet refused to hold
With a heart too heavy for a girl of only 10 years old
She reached the beach and saw the river
Her feet were numb and she started to shiver
Gazing at the water she made up her mind
Her feet started moving, her eyes just went blind
A week later her lifeless body was found
The sweet little girl lay dead on the ground
Her life on this earth had been too much to bare
But would her mummy and daddy ever really care?
Reacties op dit gedicht
| moongirl1982: | Woensdag, augustus 23, 2006 14:20 |
| mishandeling is nooit goed, groet moongirl1982 |
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| simple mind: | Dinsdag, augustus 22, 2006 16:54 |
| weer zo mooi... | |
| -Sue-: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 20:11 |
| Mooi gerijmd maar het lijkt nie gedrongen in een rijmschema. Prachtig werk! |
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| Augustijntje: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 14:09 |
| *want shame on me! x! |
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| Augustijntje: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 14:09 |
| .. waw, you really keep impressing me!! this one is really amazing (really do hope it''s fiction.. I wouldn''t won''t anyone to feel like this) x! |
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| fran92: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 13:55 |
| jeetje zo droevig dit maar zo mooi geschreven! liefs fran92 |
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| bijouken: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 11:13 |
| Fictie??? Mooi geschreven, graag gelezen. Liefs. |
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| Islanzadí: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 10:10 |
| Prima gedaan, ik zal de dishes maar aan de kant schuiven en je compleet gaan richten op schrijven! | |
| xavion: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 09:10 |
| ;) Lieve liefs, XaVioN |
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| QueenBee: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 08:57 |
| Zó sterk verhaal.. harde realiteit; maar zó mooi! :) Liefs |
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| angels&dreamer: | Maandag, augustus 21, 2006 00:42 |
| Oh damnnn dit is droevig..!! :( De harde realiteit. Deels zouden haar ouders pijn omhebben.. maar hun eigen pijn is groter denk ik. Je hebt echt mooie diepe gedichten meid. Ga vooral zo door. ;) Liefs, van mij :) |
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| powderfinger: | Zondag, augustus 20, 2006 23:08 |
| sterk verteld verhaal, en cudo''s voor de spelling:-) (en, nee, ik denk het niet..) |
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| Oxygénéé: | Zondag, augustus 20, 2006 22:18 |
| echt diep dit! en ja, ''k denk ''t wel |
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| Goldie The OG: | Zondag, augustus 20, 2006 22:07 |
| Phew deep,maar echt mooi. schrijf je ook liedjes wand er zit er zit ook een soort ritme en melodie in je manier van schrijven |
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| Auteur: dishesqueen | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: michris | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 20 augustus 2006 | ||
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